About this item

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“This Grey Elephant teddy bear is made from high-quality, non-toxic materials. It measures 32 cm in length and comes in a sweet grey color, adding fun to your child’s playtime and making them feel special. The soft toy is easy to clean. It’s fully washable, even in a washing machine.

When you touch it, the teddy bear feels soft and smooth. It provides comfort and relaxation, especially when you’re a little tired. It can also serve as a supportive pillow for your neck and head, making it the perfect cuddle buddy for children of all ages.

Adding this Baby Joys soft toy to your kids’ room will bring vibrancy and color to their space. It’s a great gift for your beloved kids.”